Thursday, February 24, 2022

Thursday, February 24th

SMALL GROUPS: Review the essay description. Brainstorm a list of possible angles one might take on this assignment. 


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READ MODEL ESSAYS

  • What is thesis?
  • Identify topic sentences
  • Identify Evidence and Analysis


DRAFT THESIS STATEMENT On whiteboard or post-it or table

Self-critique based on criteria...

The Thesis Statement (THE CLAIM)

1.  How does a thesis function in a literary analysis?  

  • The thesis statement makes an interpretative claim about the work.

2. What makes for a good claim about  literature/film/art, etc?

  • It states your conclusions/interpretations about the work. Whatever the claim, you must be able to support it with evidence.

  • Not summary, but interpretation.

  • It doesn’t just state the obvious; it expresses an interpretation that reasonable people could disagree with.

  • It is specific and focused without being so narrow that there is insufficient evidence.

  • It generally expresses one main idea.  If compound ideas are stated in a thesis, the relationship between them is very clear.

  • Try to use sophisticated phrasings beyond "This poem is about...."

  • Often employs the title and/or author as the subject of the sentence

  • And, as ever, good claims ....

    • debatable

    • are specific and focused

    • avoid stating the obvious

    • are clearly and eloquently stated

    • avoid the first person (AVOID “I think, I believe, My opinion is, etc.”)

    • can be supported with sufficient evidence

Have Jessica come critique your thesis once you have revised.


GATHER EVIDENCE (see overview doc for links to resources)


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