Today's Goals

• Get critiqued!
• Get 'er done!

Draft  Due to me by midnight tomorrow!

Critique Protocol

1. On the top of your draft, write a focusing question for your peers to address as they critique.  (Think:  What do you want them to look for?  What are you struggling with most?)

2.  Look at the "content" section of the rubric.  On the the top of your drafts, please jot down which two content areas that you need to work on most.  (Sense of Place, Environmental Ethic, Descriptive language/Grand Style, and/or Cohesiveness/Integration)

3. Do a three way exchange.  Critiquers, give feedback to the draft in the margins (use the "review" and "track changes" functions for electronic documents.  Focus on giving feedback to the two content areas and try to answer the focusing question.

4.  When everyone is done, discuss your feedback and clarify any confusion.

5.  REVISE YOUR OWN DRAFT!!

Work Time

• Sense of Place draft due to me tomorrow
• Work on Response/Action Project